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1.Fish display

Ocean park has a large and beautiful fish display which include many different types of fish.We can walk along the special tunnel under water to see dangerous shark swimming nearly.You can also see treasure types of fishes which come from all over the world.

2.The cable cars

The cable cars join between two mountains within Ocean park. We can see the wonderful width ocean and breath fresh air.Enjoying privacy spaces with natural environment is comfortable.

3.The pandas

The pandas is a China protecting animals.They live in open environment and hear lovely birds voices.We can see pandas eat grass frequently.

4.Foods and drinks

We can buy some snacks somewhere in Ocean Park.Restaurants have provide delicious food and drink.McDonald and starbar coffee shop have outlet there.

5.Transport

We can go to Ocean Park by bus 91X in central MTR station or public transport.

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1.Ocean park has a large, beautiful aquarium displaying many species of fish. We walked along the under water tunnel and saw dangerous sharks swimming nearby. You may see valuable fish from all over the world.

2.The cabel cars join the mountains of Ocean park. We saw a wonderful expanse of ocean and fresh sea air. There are comfortable, private areas of natural beauty.